permaculture

[Rael Bassan <rael@ripco.com>]

On skimming the wikipedia's permaculture article, 
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Permaculture It was obvious that additional 
editing is needed.

To reduce edit war energy, perhaps the changes could be collectively 
burnished in a more open wiki, before submission to wikipedia.

At first glance, these sections drew my attention:

1) Permaculture design for ecologinomic (ecology-economic) ethics.
The horrid neologism "ecologinomic" is missing both quotes and definitions 
in dictionaries (Websters and the top two neologism dictionaries listed at 
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Neologism which includes The Internalational 
Dictionary of Neologisms, http://www.neologisms.us/ curated by 
permaculturalist mIEKAL aND.)

2) In the Critiques section they have:
Some critics have argued that permaculture is best suited to tropical, 
mediterranean or desert conditions, but isn't suitable for a cool temperate 
country such as the UK. [5]

Which ignores the many UK usages that follow in the Contemporary examples 
section:

3) In the Contemporary examples section, they request:
Please wikify (format) this [North America] article or section as suggested 
in the Guide to layout and the Manual of Style

Rael

Chicagoland Urban Permaculture (CUP)
http://sustaincup.blogspot.com/