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[Cc-uk] Re: CC England and Wales licences online for checking
- From: Jonathan Mitchell <website3 AT jonathanmitchell.info>
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- Subject: [Cc-uk] Re: CC England and Wales licences online for checking
- Date: Wed, 16 Mar 2005 16:00:34 +0000
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>From a quick read-through there seem to be the following errors:
1. Index page: substitute ³CC EW Licences² for ³CC UK Lincence¹ (sic) and in
title of page.
2. Attribution, perhaps some others but I didn¹t make a note, jumps from
clause 2.2 to 2.4.
3. All three non-commercial¹ editions are drafted so as actually to allow
commercial use.
4. One, non-commercial¹, has no definition of non-commercial although the
other two do.
5. Attribution/non-commercial /no derivatives allows creation of derivatives
as well as commercial, compare 2.1 bullets 2 to 4 with bullet 7.
6. Attribution/no derivatives, delete ³Derivative Works or² in 2.1 bullet 3,
³the Derivative Work or² in bullet 5.
7. In definition clause in all six, substitute England and Wales¹ for UK¹
(following correct use in preamble)
8. Throughout, substitute licence¹ for license¹ when used as a noun
(license is the verb only in British English).
9. The words England and Wales¹ should be inserted in the subtitle
immediately below Legal Code¹ (it¹s only the generic licence that doesn¹t
state its jurisdiction).
But I haven¹t done a proper proof-reading There are other drafting points
which may be policy questions, e.g. inconsistent use of singular/plural,
using Licensor¹ as synonymous with ³original author¹: presumably all of
these have been discussed.
Jonathan
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From: "Christian Ahlert" <christian.ahlert AT internet-institute.oxford.ac.uk>
Date: Wed, 16 Mar 2005 11:24:02 +0100
To: Creative Commons UK <cc-uk AT lists.ibiblio.org>, Jonathan Mitchell
<website3 AT jonathanmitchell.info>
Subject: CC England and Wales licences online for checking
Hi all
Finally after 16th months we are there!
You can find the CC England and Wales licences online
at
http://users.ox.ac.uk/~inet0009/creative_commons/
Before they go finally on the Creative Commons website pls help us reviewing
the licences for mistakes, problems with numbering etc...which might have
occurred during the creation of the different versions in XHTML.
Thanks
--Ch
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[Cc-uk] RE: Cc-uk Digest, Vol 14, Issue 10,
Sylvia Carr, 03/16/2005
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Re: [Cc-uk] RE: licences launch,
Jonathan Mitchell, 03/16/2005
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[Cc-uk] CC England and Wales licences online for checking,
Christian Ahlert, 03/16/2005
- [Cc-uk] Re: CC England and Wales licences online for checking, Jonathan Mitchell, 03/16/2005
- Re: [Cc-uk] CC England and Wales licences online for checking, Dylan Harris, 03/16/2005
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Re: [Cc-uk] CC England and Wales licences online for checking,
Bernard Hurley, 03/16/2005
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Re: [Cc-uk] CC England and Wales licences online for checking,
Julian Elve, 03/18/2005
- Re: [Cc-uk] CC England and Wales licences online for checking, Jonathan Mitchell, 03/18/2005
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Re: [Cc-uk] CC England and Wales licences online for checking,
Julian Elve, 03/18/2005
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[Cc-uk] CC England and Wales licences online for checking,
Christian Ahlert, 03/16/2005
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Re: [Cc-uk] RE: licences launch,
Jonathan Mitchell, 03/16/2005
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