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[John Schinnerer <john@eco-living.net>]

Aloha,

> Attached are two ingredients for the hg website:

Appears to be two versions of the mission-vision document...I don't see 
bios in either attachment.

> 1.  final blurbs - I have incorporated your edits where I saw fit.  If 
> you still have serious issues with something, let me know.  Otherwise, 
> Chad, can you please post these on the website asap?  (And Johns, I am 
> still mindful of your concerns regarding what fits into mission vs. 
> vision vs. general introduction - perhaps once we add a more general 
> introduction/background, we can trim the vision?  What do you think?)

Why not just do it now?  There's enough for both in what currently 
appears under "vision," but it's all mixed together and not clear what 
our vision actually is.

Looks to me like the last paragraph is mostly vision statement material. 
 There might be another couple of sentences from earlier paragraphs 
that would also fit...again, as a guiding chunk of text the vision is 
the "doing" of PIW.

The rest is definitions and explantions related to the project (and thus 
to the mission and vision).  This would IMO be the "more general 
intro/background" you mention.

cheers,
John S.


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