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[John Schinnerer <john@eco-living.net>]

Aloha,

> Why not just do it now?
>
> Because I am super busy at the moment and want to get this up on the website
> asap.

No worries, I don't need you to hurry in either case.

My thought towards editing is as I said:

> Looks to me like the last paragraph is mostly vision statement material. 
>   There might be another couple of sentences from earlier paragraphs 
> that would also fit...again, as a guiding chunk of text the vision is 
> the "doing" of PIW.

...and I'm not clear what really our vision statement is.  I still don't 
get anything real clear vision-wise out of the existing content other 
than my thought above about what might be parts of a vision statement 
buried within it.
If we had a significant group conversation to produce a vision statement 
I confess I missed it.
If we did and I'm the only one who doesn't think it's a sufficiently 
good and clear vision statment, fine with me if you put it up as it is.

John S.

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