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[Rob Myers <robmyers AT mac.com>]

I have only a few minor comments to make:

III.d
The paragraph references should probably be lowercase letters.

II.e
Is this a must, rather than a may?

IV.Additional Legal Note (between a and b)
This might benefit from being broken up into two or more sentences.

IV.f
This is in-keeping with the right of integrity but not mentioned in the 
original CC license and should be removed.

IV.g
This is the upgrade clause, and the use-any-international-license 
clause combined. It's wonderfully succinct, but these are both 
important points so they might possibly benefit from separate and 
explicit treatment.

V.e and f
This is in-keeping with the right of integrity but not mentioned in the 
original CC license and should be removed.

7 A and B
Are these "last important legal things", or are they "musts" or even 
their own section? They seem more to do with the actual provisions of 
the license rather than its interpretation or applicability.

Otherwise, this is excellent!

- Rob.