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  • From: neuron <vlmarek AT volny.cz>
  • To: sm-discuss AT lists.ibiblio.org
  • Subject: Re: [SM-Discuss] Another SMGL Wallpaper
  • Date: Thu, 5 Jan 2006 17:36:24 +0100

Hi,

> Well my campaign for more Source Mage eye candy is
> still pulling them in.
>
> Here is the latest sent by Digitex3d.
>
> http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/8726/sourcemage4nc.png

It's nice clean design, really. I'm not sure if this is the right place
for comments ( you are Digitex3d ? ), but anyway. Two things catched my
eye.

a) The raven has cat's eye. That's just not normal :) But I must admit
that having 'real' black eye would not look better.

b) There's gradient under the wave, from dark gray to lighter gray. The
gradient is too rough, I can se 'stripes' going from lefttop to
rightbottom. Bad thing is that you can see the stripes also on the
raven, especially around the wing. Also the stripes ends in the middle
of the image, around the place where the raven would have legs.
- Either it could use some diffuse to blend the stripes together
- Or if the stripes are on purpose, the raven should stand above them,
and perhaps I would try continue with the stripes till the end of image.

I especially like the "SOURCE MAGE" text and the border around the
raven, it adds nice touch. All of this is ofcourse only IMO, and the
image is allready great as it is. Good work !

--
neuron

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