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["Lawrence F. London, Jr." <lfl@intrex.net>]

John Schinnerer wrote:
> Aloha,
>
> Agree with Lawrence on "use" or similar instead of "cultivate."
>
> Agree with Scott on PC > Ag, PC is a design system > ag stuff.
>
> Great copy Stephanie! ...and a majority of stuff in the vision statement 
> is not vision statement info.
> It's all excellent content - some of it would however best be removed 
> from under the vision header and given its own header.

That is a good idea. Put in some analogue of an "about" document, i.e. one on 
permaculture.

> For example the definition of permaculture - great to have that, and 
> maybe links to others, and that definition is IMO not part of our vision.

Important to have in some section of project info on the homepage though.

> All the copy that talks about the "doing" of the project is the core of 
> the "vision" part.

Good.

> The explanations and clarifications of the "doing" can be separated out 
> and provided alongside, after, etc.
> This will make it easier for visitors to see the core vision and then as 
> much explanation or clarification as they need.

Great idea to have an expanded vision section.

LL
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