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  • From: John Schinnerer <john@eco-living.net>
  • To: PCPLANTDB <pcplantdb@lists.ibiblio.org>
  • Subject: Re: [pcplantdb] blurbs...again
  • Date: Sat, 09 Oct 2004 11:12:14 +0000

Aloha,

Agree with Lawrence on "use" or similar instead of "cultivate."

Agree with Scott on PC > Ag, PC is a design system > ag stuff.

Great copy Stephanie! ...and a majority of stuff in the vision statement is not vision statement info.
It's all excellent content - some of it would however best be removed from under the vision header and given its own header.
For example the definition of permaculture - great to have that, and maybe links to others, and that definition is IMO not part of our vision.

All the copy that talks about the "doing" of the project is the core of the "vision" part.
The explanations and clarifications of the "doing" can be separated out and provided alongside, after, etc.
This will make it easier for visitors to see the core vision and then as much explanation or clarification as they need.

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