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From: Evan Prodromou <evan AT bad.dynu.ca>
To: Discussion on the Creative Commons license drafts <cc-licenses AT lists.ibiblio.org>
Cc: marcus AT uottawa.ca
Subject: Comments on iCommons Canada en licences
Date: Mon, 21 Mar 2005 07:44:28 -0500

As mentioned before, I made plain-text versions of the iCommons Canada licences available here:

http://bad.dynu.ca/~evan/ccpl-ca-en/

While working with them, I noticed these copy-editing problems (there are probably others), which I'll reference in the Attribution 2.0 Canada licence:

In Section 1.g., the word "Musical Work" starts with a curly double quote rather than a straight ASCII quote, as used in the rest of the text.
Section 1.g. ends with a semicolon rather than a period, as do all of the other definitions.
Section 4.c.i. includes a curly apostrophe rather than a straight ASCII apostrophe ("Original Author's").
Section 4.d. also has a curly apostrophe in "Original Author's honour".
Section 8.d. ends with a comma.

It's probably worth noting these for future revisions. Thanks,

~Evan

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Evan Prodromou
evan AT bad.dynu.ca

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