Development of Creative Commons licenses

[Jessica Coates <j2.coates AT qut.edu.au>]

My initial thought is, predictably enough, about readability. Some of the 
language is getting pretty dense.

For instance, I had real difficulty following para 3. Would it work better as 
a dot point list, or broken up into several sentences?

More substantial comments to follow.


Jessica Coates
Project Manager
Creative Commons Clinic
Queensland University of Technology

ph: 07 3138 8301
fax: 07 3138 9598
email: j2.coates AT qut.edu.au


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Date: Fri, 29 Aug 2008 10:08:49 -0700
From: "Diane Peters" <diane AT creativecommons.org>
Subject: [cc-licenses] CC0 Beta/Discussion Draft 3
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We're pleased to announce the next draft of the CC0 Waiver, see here:
http://creativecommons.org/weblog/entry/9071

This list will continue to be the main venue for feedback.  We ask that
comments be submitted within the next 30 days.
Thanks to all of you for your very valuable contributions to date, we look
forward to fielding your thoughts on this new draft.
Diane

Diane M. Peters, General Counsel
Creative Commons
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