[Cc-south-caucasus] Armenia_New CC Licenses_5+1

Movses Hakobyan movses.hakobyan at gmail.com
Mon May 18 09:14:37 EDT 2009


Dear Catharina,
Thank you for comments, in general I followed them and inserted my comments
between lines below. I attached only word files, PDF files shall be
submitted after final approval. thank you once again.

Movses

On Mon, May 11, 2009 at 1:30 PM, Catharina Maracke <
catharina at creativecommons.org> wrote:

> *Dear Movses,
>
> dear all,
>
> My sincere apologies for taking so long to get back to you. Thank you so
> much for your patience. I have reviewed all documents which look really good
> to me - thank you very much for all your time and effort on this project.
> There are just some minor questions, I would like to clarify before we move
> forward and work on the xhtml formatting.
>
> Please note, that the comments below are only questions and suggestions for
> the English files. Since the Armenian version will be the final one, I
> encourage you to work very carefully in both languages, so that we are all
> on the same page regarding the English retranslation and - more importantly
> - the Armenian licenses are correct.
>
> BY:*
> * License Grant: Waiver for sui generis database right is listed in a
> separate numeration whereas in some other licenses (e.g. BY-NC), this
> section is part of the last sentence of section 3. Please make sure that
> this is consistent with all six licenses.
>
OK

>
>
> *Section 4d): Moral Rights language is not what we agreed on?
>
Right, I just followed the wording of unported licenses that I thought is
preferable (changed)

>
> *BY-NC:*
>
> *In Preamble refers to the term "Work" whereas the BY and BY-NC-SA licenses
> refer to the "Rights of the Licensor with respect to his / work.... "?
>
Thanks, I overlooked that

>
> *License Grant: Last sentence should be amended to reflect NC structure?
> See last sentence of section 3) in US NY-NC:
>
> All rights not expressly granted by Licensor are hereby reserved,
> including but not limited to the rights set forth in Sections 4(d) and 4(e).
>

*This part I amended as in unported License but 4(e) according to US license
is dealing with WebCasting Rights and Statutory Royalties I omitted.*

>
> *Section 4c) reference should be 3a) instead of 3b) ("...consistent with
> section 3b,...")
>
Section 4 (c)  - is setting attribution mechanisms, subpoint iv. is about
attribution in case of Adaptation that is why I specified 3 (b)-Attribution
instead of 3 (a)-Collections. I think there is no need to make reference to
Collections in this case?

>
> *See above: Moral Rights language is not what we agreed on?
>
OK

>
> *BY-NC-ND: *
> *
> *
> **see above: Preamble refers to the term "work" again?*
>
 OK

> **
>
> *see above: License Grant: Last sentence should be amended to reflect NC
> structure? See last sentence of section 3) in US NY-NC-ND.
>
*This part I amended as in unported License but 4(e) according to US license
is dealing with WebCasting Rights and Statutory Royalties I omitted.*

>
> *see above: Moral Rights language is not what we agreed on?
>
OK

>
>
> *BY-ND:*
> *
> *
> **see above: Preamble refers to the term "work" again?
> *
>
OK

> *
>
> *see above: License Grant: Waiver for sui generis database right is listed
> in a separate numeration whereas in some other licenses (e.g. BY-NC), this
> section is part of the last sentence of section 3. Please make sure that
> this is consistent with all six licenses.
> *
>
OK

> *
> *Restrictions: section 4c): Clarification for sui generis database right
> refers to section 4a) but not to section 4b)?
> *
>
OK

> *
>
> *see above: Moral Rights language is not what we agreed on?
> *
>
OK

> *
>
> BY-SA:
>
> *Section 1b): definition of "Creative Commons Compatible license" needs to
> include a reference a reference to the "unported" license as well, see
> language in the US BY-SA:
>
> "Creative Commons Compatible License" means a license that is listed at
> http://creativecommons.org/compatiblelicenses that has been approved by
> Creative Commons as being essentially equivalent to this License, including,
> at a minimum, because that license: (i) contains terms that have the same
> purpose, meaning and effect as the License Elements of this License; and,
> (ii) explicitly permits the relicensing of derivatives of works made
> available under that license under this License or either a Creative Commons
> unported license or a Creative Commons jurisdiction license with the same
> License Elements as this License.
> *
>
OK

> *
>
> *
> **Restrictions: section 4c): Clarification for sui generis database right
> refers to section 4a) and 4b) but not to section 4c)? *
>
Maybe this is a misprint but no reference to 4 (c) is made.

> **
>
> *see above: Moral Rights language is not what we agreed on?
>
OK

>
> Most of my comments refer to more than license, but I have listed them
> repeatedly since I thought it might be easier to follow up and use this
> E-Mail as some kind of "check list". Please let me know if I am missing
> anything or if you have any questions or concerns.
>
> Once again, thank you very much for all your time on this. I am very much
> looking forward to seeing the licenses going live!!
>
> Best regards,
>
> Catharina
>
>
> Dr. Catharina Maracke
> catharina at creativecommons.org
>
>
>
>
> On May 1, 2009, at 12:25 PM, Movses Hakobyan wrote:
>
> Dear friends,
> Please have a look at five CC licenses (both in English and Armenian) with
> different terms and conditions that are adapted to Armenian legislation
> based on BY-NC-SA License previously approved by colleagues from CCi.
> In addition, some changes were made into the latter (BY-NC-SA) taking into
> account recent corrections.
> Please voice all your remarks and comments/suggestions further to improve
> wording of Licenses. Thank you in advance.
>
> With best regards
>
> --
> Movses Hakobyan
> Lawyer/Projects Director
> Internews' Center for Information Law and Policy
> 3 Arshakunyats Ave, Yerevan 0023, Armenia
> tel: + 374 10 583620
> fax: + 374 10 569041
> www.internews.am
> www.media.am
> www.gipi.am
> <BY_3.0_Armenia-EN (Final_30 Apr 2009).pdf><BY_3.0_Armenia-EN (with
> tracks_30 Apr 2009).doc><BY_3 0_Armenia_AM (Final_30 Apr 2009).pdf><BY-NC_3.0_Armenia-EN
> (Final_30 Apr 2009).pdf><BY-NC_3.0_Armenia-EN (With Tracks_Final_30 Apr
> 2009).doc><BY-NC_3 0_Armenia_AM (Final_30 Apr 2009).pdf><BY-NC-ND_3.0_Armenia-EN
> (Final_30 Apr 2009).pdf><BY-NC-ND_3.0_Armenia-EN (With Tracks_Final_30 Apr
> 2009).doc><BY-NC-ND_3 0_Armenia_AM (Final_30 Apr 2009).pdf><BY-ND_3.0_Armenia-EN
> (With Tracks_Final_30 Apr 2009).doc><BY-ND_3.0_Armenia-EN (Final_30 Apr
> 2009).pdf><BY-ND_3 0_Armenia_AM (Final_30 Apr 2009).pdf><BY-SA_
> 3.0_Armenia-EN (Final_30 Apr 2009).pdf><BY-SA_ 3.0_Armenia-EN (With
> Tracks_Final_30 Apr 2009).doc><BY-ND_3 0_Armenia_AM (Final_30 Apr
> 2009).pdf><License_BY-NC-SA_3.0_Armenia_EN_Final_30 Apr 2009.pdf><License_BY-NC-SA_3
> 0_Armenia_AM_FINAL_30 Apr 2009.pdf><BY-SA_3 0_Armenia_AM (Final_30 Apr
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-- 
Movses Hakobyan
Lawyer/Projects Director
Internews' Center for Information Law and Policy
3 Arshakunyats Ave, Yerevan 0023, Armenia
tel: + 374 10 583620
fax: + 374 10 569041
www.internews.am
www.media.am
www.gipi.am
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