[Cc-south-caucasus] Georgian licenses draft2

Nino Kuntseva-Gabashvili step at grdf.ge
Tue May 12 00:46:46 EDT 2009


Dear Catharina,

I send you final corrected versions of all 5 licenses.

best,
Nino
----- Original Message ----- 
From: "Catharina Maracke" <catharina at creativecommons.org>
To: "Movses Hakobyan" <movses.hakobyan at gmail.com>
Cc: <cc-south-caucasus at lists.ibiblio.org>; "Diane Peters" 
<diane at creativecommons.org>
Sent: Sunday, May 10, 2009 8:30 PM
Subject: Re: [Cc-south-caucasus] Armenia_New CC Licenses_5+1


> Dear Movses,
>
> dear all,
>
> My sincere apologies for taking so long to get back to you. Thank you
> so much for your patience. I have reviewed all documents which look
> really good to me - thank you very much for all your time and effort
> on this project. There are just some minor questions, I would like to
> clarify before we move forward and work on the xhtml formatting.
>
> Please note, that the comments below are only questions and
> suggestions for the English files. Since the Armenian version will be
> the final one, I encourage you to work very carefully in both
> languages, so that we are all on the same page regarding the English
> retranslation and - more importantly - the Armenian licenses are
> correct.
>
>
> BY:
>
> * License Grant: Waiver for sui generis database right is listed in a
> separate numeration whereas in some other licenses (e.g. BY-NC), this
> section is part of the last sentence of section 3. Please make sure
> that this is consistent with all six licenses.
>
> *Section 4d): Moral Rights language is not what we agreed on?
>
> BY-NC:
>
> *In Preamble refers to the term "Work" whereas the BY and BY-NC-SA
> licenses refer to the "Rights of the Licensor with respect to his /
> work.... "?
>
> *License Grant: Last sentence should be amended to reflect NC
> structure? See last sentence of section 3) in US NY-NC:
>
> All rights not expressly granted by Licensor are hereby reserved,
> including but not limited to the rights set forth in Sections 4(d) and
> 4(e).
>
> *Section 4c) reference should be 3a) instead of 3b) ("...consistent
> with section 3b,...")
>
> *See above: Moral Rights language is not what we agreed on?
>
> BY-NC-ND:
>
> *see above: Preamble refers to the term "work" again?
>
> *see above: License Grant: Last sentence should be amended to reflect
> NC structure? See last sentence of section 3) in US NY-NC-ND.
>
> *see above: Moral Rights language is not what we agreed on?
>
>
> BY-ND:
>
> *see above: Preamble refers to the term "work" again?
>
> *see above: License Grant: Waiver for sui generis database right is
> listed in a separate numeration whereas in some other licenses (e.g.
> BY-NC), this section is part of the last sentence of section 3. Please
> make sure that this is consistent with all six licenses.
>
> *Restrictions: section 4c): Clarification for sui generis database
> right refers to section 4a) but not to section 4b)?
>
> *see above: Moral Rights language is not what we agreed on?
>
>
>
> BY-SA:
>
> *Section 1b): definition of "Creative Commons Compatible license"
> needs to include a reference a reference to the "unported" license as
> well, see language in the US BY-SA:
>
> "Creative Commons Compatible License" means a license that is listed
> at http://creativecommons.org/compatiblelicenses that has been
> approved by Creative Commons as being essentially equivalent to this
> License, including, at a minimum, because that license: (i) contains
> terms that have the same purpose, meaning and effect as the License
> Elements of this License; and, (ii) explicitly permits the relicensing
> of derivatives of works made available under that license under this
> License or either a Creative Commons unported license or a Creative
> Commons jurisdiction license with the same License Elements as this
> License.
>
> *Restrictions: section 4c): Clarification for sui generis database
> right refers to section 4a) and 4b) but not to section 4c)?
>
> *see above: Moral Rights language is not what we agreed on?
>
> Most of my comments refer to more than license, but I have listed them
> repeatedly since I thought it might be easier to follow up and use
> this E-Mail as some kind of "check list". Please let me know if I am
> missing anything or if you have any questions or concerns.
>
> Once again, thank you very much for all your time on this. I am very
> much looking forward to seeing the licenses going live!!
>
> Best regards,
>
> Catharina
>
>
> Dr. Catharina Maracke
> catharina at creativecommons.org
>
>
>
>
> On May 1, 2009, at 12:25 PM, Movses Hakobyan wrote:
>
>> Dear friends,
>> Please have a look at five CC licenses (both in English and
>> Armenian) with
>> different terms and conditions that are adapted to Armenian
>> legislation
>> based on BY-NC-SA License previously approved by colleagues from CCi.
>> In addition, some changes were made into the latter (BY-NC-SA)
>> taking into
>> account recent corrections.
>> Please voice all your remarks and comments/suggestions further to
>> improve
>> wording of Licenses. Thank you in advance.
>>
>> With best regards
>>
>> -- 
>> Movses Hakobyan
>> Lawyer/Projects Director
>> Internews' Center for Information Law and Policy
>> 3 Arshakunyats Ave, Yerevan 0023, Armenia
>> tel: + 374 10 583620
>> fax: + 374 10 569041
>> www.internews.am
>> www.media.am
>> www.gipi.am
>> <BY_3.0_Armenia-EN (Final_30 Apr 2009).pdf><BY_3.0_Armenia-EN (with
>> tracks_30 Apr 2009).doc><BY_3 0_Armenia_AM (Final_30 Apr
>> 2009).pdf><BY-NC_3.0_Armenia-EN (Final_30 Apr 2009).pdf><BY-
>> NC_3.0_Armenia-EN (With Tracks_Final_30 Apr 2009).doc><BY-NC_3
>> 0_Armenia_AM (Final_30 Apr 2009).pdf><BY-NC-ND_3.0_Armenia-EN
>> (Final_30 Apr 2009).pdf><BY-NC-ND_3.0_Armenia-EN (With
>> Tracks_Final_30 Apr 2009).doc><BY-NC-ND_3 0_Armenia_AM (Final_30 Apr
>> 2009).pdf><BY-ND_3.0_Armenia-EN (With Tracks_Final_30 Apr
>> 2009).doc><BY-ND_3.0_Armenia-EN (Final_30 Apr 2009).pdf><BY-ND_3
>> 0_Armenia_AM (Final_30 Apr 2009).pdf><BY-SA_ 3.0_Armenia-EN
>> (Final_30 Apr 2009).pdf><BY-SA_ 3.0_Armenia-EN (With Tracks_Final_30
>> Apr 2009).doc><BY-ND_3 0_Armenia_AM (Final_30 Apr
>> 2009).pdf><License_BY-NC-SA_3.0_Armenia_EN_Final_30 Apr
>> 2009.pdf><License_BY-NC-SA_3 0_Armenia_AM_FINAL_30 Apr 2009.pdf><BY-
>> SA_3 0_Armenia_AM (Final_30 Apr
>> 2009).pdf>_______________________________________________
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