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  • From: sindi keesan <keesan AT SDF.ORG>
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  • Subject: [BL] other resume (not for Talent Bank)
  • Date: Wed, 14 Dec 2011 23:29:42 +0000 (UTC)

I will help you to rewrite it with fewer words but not right now.
Looks much better. People are versatile, not skills.


Dave Marsh
DETRIT, NI
Home: 313-407-5234 ( Cell: 248-763-6987
UKSALFORD AT MSN.COM

|Profile
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| |Administrative support professional offering versatile office
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| |management skills and proficiency in Microsoft Office programs.
Strong |
| |planner and problem solver who readily adapts to change, works
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| |independently and exceeds expectations. Able to juggle multiple
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| |priorities and meet tight deadlines without compromising quality.
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|Education
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| |Sight & Sound College - Manchester, UK
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| |Relevant Courses:

I think the next 8 lines don't belong right here, or something was omitted. They are a short list of your jobs not courses.
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| |Data Entry Specialist
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| |Medical Coding and Billing Clerk
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| |Keyboarding and Document Formatting
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| |Staffing Specialist
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| |Account Manager
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| |Logistics Analyst
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| |Leasing Agent (Property)
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| |Professional Development:
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| |BSc Computer Science
This should go above.


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|Key Skills
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| |Office |Office Management|Spreadsheets/Reports |Front-Desk
Reception|
| |Skills: | |Event Management |
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| | |Records |Calendaring |Executive
Support |
| | |Management | |Travel
Coordination |
| | |Database | |
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| | |Administration | |
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| |Computer|MS Word |MS Outlook |MS Publisher
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| |Skills: |MS Excel |MS Access |FileMaker Pro
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| | |MS PowerPoint |MS Project |Windows
|

Looks great.


|Experience
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| | |
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| |Processed medical claims. Translated medical procedures into
appropriate|
| |insurance codes
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| |Billed insurance companies. Entered patient demographics. Produced
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| |statement of claims.
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| |
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| |Handling and sustaining inventory for Ford Motor Company
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| |Logistics, materials management, product management, cycle count.
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| |Responsible for organization's reports and communications.
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| |
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| |Leasing Agent
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| |Communicated effectively with multiple departments to plan meetings
and |
| |prepare welcome packages for new students. Established strong
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| |relationships to gain support and effectively achieve results.
|
| |Helped coordinate dozens of recruitment events (average of 12 large
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| |gatherings per year) that contributed to consistently high
enrollment |
| |levels.
|

You probably should list the companies you worked for and the job titles.

Entrusted with some task, trusted to do something.

This looks very impressive (in addition to the perfect spelling of lots of long words!). I will help you shorten it a bit (you don't want excellent and excellence in one sentence, for instance).

| |Entrusted to manage office in the supervisor's absence. Provided
timely,|
| |courteous and knowledgeable response to information requests;
screened |
| |and transferred calls; and prepared official school correspondence.
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| |Co-developed comprehensive, 60-page training manual that enabled
faster |
| |ramp-up for newly hired support staff.
|
| |Earned excellent marks on performance reviews, with citations for
|
| |excellence in areas including work volume, accuracy and quality;
ability|
| |to learn and master new concepts; positive work ethic; and
commitment to|
| |providing unsurpassed service.
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| |
|


Is it two pages?

Let's try to combine the two documents somehow - add some dates to this one and mention helping church members and why you were not working since 2008.




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