[b-hebrew] Alter's translation (Was: Daniel 6:27 (time indefinite) II)
Peter Kirk
peter at qaya.org
Tue Nov 22 07:56:37 EST 2005
On 22/11/2005 03:33, Harold Holmyard wrote:
>B. M. Rocine wrote:
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(actually it was me quoting Alter)
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>>>>“When God began to create heaven and earth, and the earth then was
>>>>welter and waste and darkness over the deep and God’s breath hovering
>>>>over the waters, God said, ‘Let there be light’. And there was light.”
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>HH: "When God began to create the earth, and the earth then was welter
>and waste, with darkness over the deep and God's breath hovering over
>the waters, God said, 'Let there be be light." And there was light."
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That is considerably better, except that presumably you omitted "heaven
and" accidentally, although I still don't like "welter". Also "then"
seems strange if this part is intended to be governed by "when". But why
didn't Alter write this? Was it because of the hyper-literalism that the
vav prefix must always be translated "and"? No, because he has omitted
completely the vav prefix at the start of v.3 - which for me is a good
reason to reject also Alter's exegesis by which vv.1-2 is a complex
subordinate clause and prefer the traditional "In the beginning God
created..." But we discussed that one at great length a few years ago.
No, it seems that Alter is simply more interested in keeping his
"quirky" literary style than in getting the substance of the translation
correct.
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