[cc-commits] [CC SVN] r11380 - cc.engine/trunk/cc/engine/zero/templates

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Thu Dec 4 18:01:33 EST 2008


Author: nyergler
Date: 2008-12-04 23:01:32 +0000 (Thu, 04 Dec 2008)
New Revision: 11380

Modified:
   cc.engine/trunk/cc/engine/zero/templates/confirm-waiver.pt
   cc.engine/trunk/cc/engine/zero/templates/waiver.pt
Log:
Text changes per DP.


Modified: cc.engine/trunk/cc/engine/zero/templates/confirm-waiver.pt
===================================================================
--- cc.engine/trunk/cc/engine/zero/templates/confirm-waiver.pt	2008-12-04 22:51:22 UTC (rev 11379)
+++ cc.engine/trunk/cc/engine/zero/templates/confirm-waiver.pt	2008-12-04 23:01:32 UTC (rev 11380)
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@
 	<div class="bd">
 
 	    <p>Are you certain you wish to waive all rights to your
-	      work?  Once these rights are waived, you can not reclaim
+	      work?  Once these rights are waived, you cannot reclaim
 	      them. 
 	    </p>
 
@@ -54,9 +54,9 @@
 	    </p>
 
 	    <p>
-	      If you don't own the rights to this work, and <strong>no
-	      one</strong> owns them,
-	      the <a href="/license/publicdomain-2">Public Domain
+	      If you don't own the rights to this work, then do not
+	      use CC0.  If you believe that nobody owns rights to the
+	      work, then the <a href="/license/publicdomain-2">Public Domain
 	      Certification</a> may be what you're looking for.
 	    </p>
 

Modified: cc.engine/trunk/cc/engine/zero/templates/waiver.pt
===================================================================
--- cc.engine/trunk/cc/engine/zero/templates/waiver.pt	2008-12-04 22:51:22 UTC (rev 11379)
+++ cc.engine/trunk/cc/engine/zero/templates/waiver.pt	2008-12-04 23:01:32 UTC (rev 11380)
@@ -88,11 +88,11 @@
 	  value="confirm" />
 	</div>
 	<div class="form-answer">
-	  <label for="confirm">I hereby waive all rights to this work. 
-	    To the extent possible 
-	    under the law, I waive all copyright, moral rights, database
-	    rights, and any other rights that might be asserted over the
-	    work.
+	  <label for="confirm">
+	    I hereby waive all copyright and related or neighboring
+	    rights together with all associated claims and causes of
+	    action with respect to this work to the extent possible
+	    under the law.
 	  </label>
 	</div>
       </div>
@@ -100,6 +100,29 @@
       <div class="form-row">
 	<div class="form-question">&nbsp;</div>
 	<div class="form-answer">
+	  <textarea cols="50" rows="10">
+	  </textarea>
+	</div>
+      </div>
+
+      <div class="form-row">
+	<div class="form-question">
+	  <input name="understand" type="checkbox"
+	  id="understand_terms" class="form-field"
+	  value="confirm" />
+	</div>
+	<div class="form-answer">
+	  <label for="understand">
+	    I have read and understand the terms and intended legal
+	    effect of CC0, and hereby voluntarily elect to apply it to
+	    this work.
+	  </label>
+	</div>
+      </div>
+
+      <div class="form-row">
+	<div class="form-question">&nbsp;</div>
+	<div class="form-answer">
 	  <input type="submit" id="details-submit" 
 		 name="field1" value="continue"> 
 	</div>




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